Peer Reading- The 3 Little Pigs

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A. She did answer the questions but it was a little too english paperish. In my opinion should have just stuck to the facts a little bit more.

B. The main verb she used was "pestering."

C. I think it was a strong verb however it was not describing the main idea of the story i think she should have opened with a more straight to the point sentence.

D. The next Paragraphs went on to describe from the beginning of the story to the end. She started with the wolf asking to get in the first pig's house.

E. I do not agree that that was the next most important i think she should have explained how the third pig killed the wolf then have described the extra information about the other two pigs.

F. She did a very good telling the entire story and the details of the story! However i would have put the information in a bit of a different order but she wrote a very good story! she also was very good at sticking to the facts and not putting in her opinion.