Wednesday, January 8, 2014

Lone Star Dispatch Evaluation #3

Type: News
Title: Bowie Collaborates with UT to Create a Rain Garden

Summary: UT students and Bowie Students and faculty are going to team up to build a rain garden on the Bowie campus. The garden will be beneficial to the aquifer and will be placed in between the E and F wings.


Who was quoted in the story?
Teacher James Ellerbrock
and teacher Jill Harding

What quote was the strongest in your opinion?
the quote about how the location of the garden was decided.

Did the lead sentence make you want to keep reading?
No not really.

Was the conclusion a quote or a statement?
quote




Type: Commentary
Title: The Endless Struggle of Math

Summary: Math is proving to be hard for manny students to pass because the tests are weighted at 70%.  the writer believes this should be changed to make it more fair.

Who was quoted in the story?
no one

What quote was the strongest in your opinion?
no quotes

Did the lead sentence make you want to keep reading?
yes it did

Was the conclusion a quote or a statement?
statement



Type: Student Life
Title: Stressed? Hop on the Stress-free Wagon

Summary: All students deal with stress at some point. The article tells how we can deal with stress.

Who was quoted in the story?
Freshman Olivia Roberts
Freshman Alexandra Andsell
Freshman Eric Rhodes

What quote was the strongest in your opinion?
The quote about dealing with stress by running.

Did the lead sentence make you want to keep reading?
No

Was the conclusion a quote or a statement?
Statement



Type: Entertainment
Title: Dance Classes Take the Stage at Winter Showcase

Summary: The Dance department put on a winter show with lots of dance performances. Students tell how they felt at the showcase. 

Who was quoted in the story?
Karla Boone 
Brenda Saucedo
What quote was the strongest in your opinion?
The quote where Saucedo tells why she enjoyed the showcase

Did the lead sentence make you want to keep reading?
yes

Was the conclusion a quote or a statement?
statement



Type: Trends and Culinary
Title: The Campus Cools Down, the Winter Style Heats Up

Summary: Students discuss their favorite winter fashion styles. There are many popular trends going around school including boots and sweaters.

Who was quoted in the story?
Senior Victoria Saenz
senior Christian Haddad
Sophomore Karla Boone

What quote was the strongest in your opinion?
The quote where Boone talks about what she thinks of when she thinks of winter fashion.

Did the lead sentence make you want to keep reading?
yes

Was the conclusion a quote or a statement?
statement



Type: Sports
Title: Soccer Tryouts: A success

Summary: Soccer tryouts were quite cold this year. However this didn't stop the girls from playing at their best and telling why they love Bowie soccer. 

Who was quoted in the story?
Junior Emma Orlando
Junior Alisa Hoban

What quote was the strongest in your opinion?
Hoban's last quote.

Did the lead sentence make you want to keep reading?
yes

Was the conclusion a quote or a statement?
Quote



Type: In-Depth 
Title: Hanukkah

Summary: The Jewish holiday of Hanukkah was celebrated on Thanksgiving this year. Students tell their favorite jewish traditions.

Who was quoted in the story?
Sophomore Brandon Crawford
Junior Megan Schwab

What quote was the strongest in your opinion?
Schwab's quote about how Hanukkah is special for her.

Did the lead sentence make you want to keep reading?
yes

Was the conclusion a quote or a statement?
quote



Lead- This winter students bundle up in their favorite winter fashion to escape the frosty temperature.



Story Idea- The musical 

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